1/3 Part Two

I asked my friend did this feedback of my ideas, he likes the first idea, because he mentioned in the feedback, the first idea reminds him of 'Antonioni’s film Blow Up', I think this is very interesting, Blow Up is one of my favorite movies and we just talked about this in class, also he think there’s absolutely mystery and danger hides in the beauty and things are always not that simple as the way they look.But he thinks it lacks some clue to help the audience to figure out this is a crime scene. I really agree with that, I need to fix more.